如何谋求书面表达的高分


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内容提要:运用词汇的数量和运用较高级词汇是高考书面表达评分的一条重要依据。要做好这一点,我们可以从以下3点入手:


如何谋求书面表达的高分

 (一)使用高级词汇

运用词汇的数量和运用较高级词汇是高考书面表达评分的一条重要依据。要做好这一点,我们可以从以下3点入手:

1. 尽量使用词组、习语来代替一些单词以增加文采。如:用make use of替代use,用be supposed to替代should,用I come up with a good idea替代I have a good idea等。

2. 使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:

Tom had his leg broken last week. (用have…done而不用broke his leg)

Our school is located in the suburb of the city. (用is located而不用lies)

3. 避免重复使用同一单词或短语。如:用I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV就比用I like reading while my brother likes watching TV好。

(二)增加语法结构

1. 好句子的技巧

 (1) 以作状语的介词短语开头。如:

【原】We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

【改】Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

(2) 以作状语的不定式短语开头。如:

【原】If you want to pass the exam, you should work very hard.

【改】In order to pass the exam, you should work very hard.

(3) 以作状语的副词开头。如:

【原】Students often stray into the habit of cheating on tests.

【改】Too often,students stray into the habit of cheating on tests.

(4) 以宾语开头。如:

【原】Now that you would not listen to my advice and you laughed at my helps, you will have what you asked for.

【改】My advice you would not listen to;my helps you laughed at.Now you will have what you asked for.

2. 巧用非谓语动词

(1) 使用现在分词。如:

【原】We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.

【改】After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

(2) 使用过去分词。如:

【原】He was satisfied with the result. He decided to go on with a new experiment

【改】 Satisfied with the result, he decided to go on with a new experiment.

3. 灵活使用不同句式

灵活运用省略句、倒装句、强调句、感叹句、with的复合结构等多种句式。

(1) 省略句。如:

If so, victory will be ours.

(2) 倒装句。如:

【原】He didn't finish his homework until the teacher came.

【改】Not until the teacher came did he finish his work.

(3) 强调句。如:

【原】Ah Fu had saved my little sister bravely.

【改】It was brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

(4) 分词短语。如:

【原】Many teenagers sit at their computers all day long and watch their favorite TV shows.

【改】Many teenagers sit at their computers all day long, watching their favorite TV shows.

(5) 由with或without引导的短语。如:

He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

(6) 对比。如:

When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed.

(7) there be结构。如:

【原】People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.

【改】There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.

4. 巧用各类从句

使用定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句等各类从句

(1)名词性从句。如:

【原】We had to stand there to catch the offender. (from www.nmet168.com)

【改】What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

(2)定语从句。如:

【原】My aunt bought me a book. The title of the book is All about The USA.

【改】My aunt bought me a book, whose title is All about The USA.

此外,还需要注意长短句交替使用,体现表达节奏美

(三)巧用连接成分  !!

1. 表起始的连接成分有:first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so /as far as , as you know等。

2. 表递进的连接成分有:besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, what’s worse = to make things worse = worse still, further more, in addition to, still, even,等。

3. 表并列的连接成分有:also, as well (as), or, either…or, neither…nor, not only…but also, and, and then, both…and等。

4. 表转折或对比的连接成分有:but, yet, however, while(而、却), otherwise, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of, after all, in fact, as a mater of fact等。

5. 表因果的连接成分有:so, thus, therefore, for, since, now that, because (of), thanks to, as a result (of), due to, owing to, so…that, such…that等。

6. 表条件的连接成分有:if, as/so long as, on condition that, provided that, suppose, unless, in case, in this case等。

7. 强调的连接成分有:above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, at least, obviously等。

8. 表解释的连接成分有:that is to say, in other words, believe it or not, to tell you the truth等。

9. 表比较的连接成分有:just as, just like, in the same way, more or less, similarly, instead

10. 表空间的连接成分有:on the left/right, to the left/right of, on one side of…on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle / centre of等。

11. 表时间的连接成分有:at first, in the beginning, next, then, later, now, then, about two months later, after a while, soon, afterwards, since then, meanwhile, in the end, at last, finally, for the first time, as soon as, after that, the next moment, up to now, before long, as, no sooner…than, hardly…when, when, from then on, sooner or later等。

12. 表列举的连接成分有:for one thing…and for another (thing), first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), finally

13. 表举例的连接成分有:for example/instance, take…for example, such as, that is, as follows,and so on等。

14. 表让步的连接成分有:as, even if / even though, although, though, while(虽然), no matter, whether…or…等。

15. 表总结的连接成分有:in short, in a word, in conclusion, in general, in brief, generally speaking, on the whole, to sum up, in all等。

16. 其它起联接作用的副词:hopefully, naturally, strangely, specifically, basically, apparently, in this way等等

  书面表达句子训练(普通----高级)

                      使用高级词汇(一)

1. He didn’t come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill.

His illness _______ _______ _______ ________ from the meeting yesterday.

2. When he was a child, he wanted to learn everything.

When he was a child, he ______ ______ _______ _______ for knowledge.

3. I’ll thank you if you think about my application.

I’ll ___________ ________ if you can ________ my application ________ __________.

4. Many people are worried about the problem of air pollution.

The problem of air pollution has caused ________ ______ ________.

5. We all think that air pollution is a very serious problem.

There is ______ ______ that air pollution is an ___________ serious problem.

6. Many experts point out that physical exercise is good for person’s health.

Many experts point out that physical exercise ________ directly _______ a person’s physical fitness.

7. We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.

We’ll _______ ______ _______ to promote the traditional friendship between us.

8. More and more people have bought cars in recent years.

The number of people, who have access to their own cars, _____ ______ sharply in the recent years.

9. I think that the number of foreign tourists should be limited.

I’m firmly ________ that the number of foreign tourists should be limited.

10. The number of students in our school has become smaller.

The number of students in our school has been _____ _______.

                         使用高级词汇(二)

1. He likes collecting foreign stamps.

He _______ ______ _______ in collecting foreign stamps.

2. As a result the plan was a failure.

The plan ______ ______ to be a failure.

3. The students must know that safety is very important to them.

It must ______ ______ ______ that the students are _______ _______ realize the _______ of safety.

4. She went to Australia to study music.

She went to Australia ______ _______ ______ _______ studying music.’

5. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.

_______ _______ the good weather, our journey was comfortable.

6. He didn’t listen to what I said in the class.

He _____ ______ ______ _______ to what I said in class.

改变句式()

1. The bus is coming now. (倒装)____________________________________________________

2. People demand that the work bad to people’s health be put off. (it形式主语)

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3. The girl is spoken highly of . Her composition was well written.(定语从句)

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4. It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up.(名词性从句)

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5. I won’t believe what he says. (让步状语)

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  改变句式()

1. After I had written the letter, I went to the post office. (非谓语)

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2. We can have enough energy to study better only in this way.(倒装)

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3. I have never seen such a good film. (倒装)

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4. He is not only a professor, but also he has published a lot of poems.(倒装)

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5. The beauty of nature attracts me. (强调)

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6. He cheated in the exam. It made the teacher very angry.(定语从句)

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7. He regretted wasting so much time in playing the video games.(感叹句)

 

改变句式()

1. He didn’t leave until I came back. (倒装/ 强调)

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2. We could find out the truth only when he returned. (only 倒装)

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3. We are supposed to put the plan into practice as soon as possible. (被动)

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4. If my health allows, I’ll work far into the night. (独立主格结构)

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5. This is the house. Its window broke last night. (定语从句)

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6. We should solve the serious problem. (It’s high time that….虚拟语气)

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7. If you turn left, you’ll find the post office..(使用并列句)

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