[我的课] 2022年11月24日应用文写作讲评

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发布时间：2022-11-24 11:51:00
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内容提要：参考范文两篇。

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom要来你校做交换生一年，写信向你咨询让他能够尽快地适应你校的生活和学习的方法，请按以下要点给他回信，给予建议，内容：
1．上课不能迟到和早退，要穿校服，保持校园整洁，不带手机回校；
2．与英国不同，走路骑车要靠右；

3．学习上，科目（subject）比较多，要合理安排时间完成作业并尽可能做好预习工作．

Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to know that you will come and study in our school as an exchange student for one year. I'm ready to give you some suggestions that can help you get used to the life and study here as quickly as possible.【高分句型一】（点明书信目的）

When it comes to the life in our school, first of all, it must be made clear that we should never be late for school or leave school before it's over. What's more, we're requested to wear school uniforms and to keep our schoolyard clean and tidy. In addition, Mobile phones are not allowed to bring back to the school.（介绍学校的纪律） Finally, when you're walking or riding on the road, please remember to keep to the right, which is quite different from England.【高分句型二】（交通方式的不同）

As for study. there are many subjects in the senior high school. so I suggest that you should arrange your time properly so that you can finish the homework on time. If you could spare some time to preview the lessons, it would be much better.（学习建议）

I hope my advice can help you. Looking forward to your arrival.（表达愿望）
Yours
Li Hua

高分句型
1． I'm ready to give you some suggestions that can help you get used to the life and study here as quickly as possible．句子里，修饰先行词 some suggestions ，关系词that 引导定语从句can help you get used to the life and study here as quickly as possible．
我准备给你一些建议，帮助你尽快适应这里的生活和学习．
2．Finally， when you're walking or riding on the road， please remember to keep to the right， which is quite different from England．句子里， when引导时间状语从句 you're walking or riding on the road；代指主句 please remember to keep to the right，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 is quite different from England．

最后，当你在路上行走或骑行时，请记得向右走，这与英国大不相同．

VI. 应用文

Dear Tom,

I’m glad you’re coming here as an exchange student next term. To help you fit the new environment more quickly, here are my suggestions.

First, you’d better learn some Chinese. When you leave the campus, you can communicate with the locals. Besides, it’s necessary that you learn some Chinese traditions so that you will have a better understanding of our life. In addition, the weather here is hot in summer, cold in winter and wet in spring and fall. You are supposed to bring the suitable kinds of clothes.

Hope my advice will be of use to you.(97 words)

Yours, Li Hua

词汇和短语检测参考答案（每空 1 分）

71. anxious 72. annoyed 73. focus 74. actually 75. confident

76. arrangements 77. impressed 78. apply for 79. package tour 80. took control of 81. looking forward to 82. are addicted to

[我的课] 2022年11月24日 应用文写作讲评

[我的课] 2022年11月24日应用文写作讲评