写好读写任务的正文部分的方法
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发布时间:2013-01-15 21:17:00
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Kids get into all kinds of trouble most of the time.I’m sure you remember your childhood well.However,there are reasons why children misbehave the way they do.
One of the top reasons why children misbehave is that they want their parents (or adults in question) to notice them.As adults,it’s easy for us to ignore children because we think that they are just being naughty as usual.But that’s not always the case.When a child misbehaves,try to find out why he or she did it in the first place and find out the root of the problem.Scolding them without even asking or knowing the whole story is not good for either children or adults.
Sometimes,children misbehave simply because they’ve got too much extra energy in them.They end up doing anything and everything they can do because they’ve got nothing else to do.
Another undeniable reason why children misbehave is that they’ve seen other people do it.Kids,especially the really young ones,like to copy the people around them.
写作内容
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词谈谈你对“如何对待孩子的错误”的看法,内容包括:
(1)描述一次你犯错误的经历及你父母对此的反映;
(2)评价你父母的做法;
(3)你认为家长应该如何对待孩子的错误。
写作要求
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
评分标准
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
下面紧扣考题写作要求,确定写作内容。
A:对于第一项要求可考虑写下面几个方面中的任何一项:
(1)once being absent from school without any reasons
(2)smoke (for boys)
(3)fight (for boys)
(4)take money from home without parents’ permission
(5)quarrel with classmates
B:父母对你的行为的态度、做法:
(1)have a long talk equally and point out the bad effect of my behaviour
(2)beat me heavily
(3)ignore me and don’t give any care
C:评价你父母的做法:
(1)be thankful for
(2)appreciate
(3)should be criticised
D:你认为家长应该如何对待孩子的错误:
(1)treat children’s problems properly,not be too rude
(2)look into the cause of the problems
(3)have a talk with the children and point out the bad effect of children’s problems
(4)give children time to realize their mistakes and chances to correct them
按照上述分析,提取4项中的任何一项写,作文的基本框架便可形成。润色之后,一篇达标的短文便写成了。
For various reasons children make mistakes frequently.Some want to be noticed by the adults,some are too energetic to be quiet while still some just imitate others’ behavior.
The passage reminds me of my experience.When I was ten,one day,out of curiosity,I smoked a cigarette in the washing room.Unfortunately,my father discovered it.To my surprise,he didn’t punish me and just had a talk with me.He told me about the bad effects of smoking,and that I shouldn’t do it any more.In this peaceful and equal talk,I realized that I was wrong and I never did this silly thing again.So I appreciated how my father handled the problem very much.
From my angle alone,adults should deal with the misbehaviour of this kind properly.First,they should teach kids how to tell right from wrong and prevent kids from making mistakes.Also,they should give kids a chance to correct themselves.
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