【备考2016】高考英语短文改错题考点

4.【2015·新课标全国II】

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

【答案】

71. parent改为parents

72. on改为in

73. very去掉

74. looks改为looking

75. where改为that 或者去掉 where

76. begun改为began

77. telling改为told

78. a改为the

79. saw后加his

80. terrible改为terribly

5.【2015·新课标全国I】

第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .

【答案】

76. think –thought

77. countryside前加the

78. or—and

79. on—with

80. been去掉

81. seriously—serious

82. airs—air

83. much—many

84. found—find

85. your—our

【解析】

76. think –thought句意：我认为生活在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”

77. countryside前加the 句意：但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指，故用定冠词the。

78. or—and句意：那里山绿并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词and。

79. on—with句意：随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着……的发展。

80. been去掉句意：许多研究表明。语态用法错误。主语与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。

81. seriously—serious句意：全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词，前面用形容词修饰。

82. airs—air 句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air为不可数