2016各地模拟试题书面表达押题集萃

9.【海南省文昌中学2016届高三上学期期末】目前，中国已经进入汽车社会，越来越多的汽车正走进寻常百姓家。但是有些驾驶员的素质令人担忧，他们的所作所为严重危害了自己和他人的安全。这种现象与社会的发展极不协调。请你以李华的身份，结合下列几点写一封倡议书，倡议所有驾驶员做“中国好司机”。

主要内容包括：

1. 简单描述以上现象；

2. 你的建议：

1）严格遵守交通规则；

2） 不隔窗抛物；

3） 礼让他人,不闯红灯。

注意：1. 词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：规则 regulations  让路give way to ;       闯红灯run the red light

Dear drivers,

At present, more and more cars have entered the homes of ordinary people.
____

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear drivers,

At present, more and more cars have entered the homes of ordinary people. But what worries us a lot is some drivers’ bad quality. Their behavior harms the safety of others and themselves. This phenomenon is against the development of our society. Then , I have some ideas for you to be good drivers.

First , all of us must obey the traffic regulations. Second, you shouldn’t throw things out of the car window. Some cleaners are hit by the passing cars and die per year while they are picking up the things you have thrown away. Next , give way to passers-by politely at the cross-roads and you mustn’t run the red light. Last but not least, always remember: your families are waiting for you at home.

I really hope all the drivers can take actions from now on and try to be good Chinese drivers.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【名师点睛】

本文是一封很优秀的倡议书，涵盖了所有的要点，并进行了清晰的阐述。文章分为三段层层推进，第一段交代背景，第二段提出个人建议，第三段提出倡议。从写作技巧来看，作者运用了较多的高级句式，如主语从句But what worries us a lot is some drivers’ bad quality.状语从句while they are picking up the things you have thrown away.还灵活使用了祈使句和陈述句，让文章的句式充满变化。另外在叙述个人建议的时候，使用了合适的连词，如first, second以及last but not least，把各要点有效地串联在一起。

考点：考查提纲类作文

10.【山东省潍坊第一中学2016届高三下学期起初考试】

随着通信技术的发展，手机愈来愈普及了。同学们几乎人人都有手机。上周你们班就学生是否应该带手机入学校进行了专题讨论。同学们对此各抒己见。请谈谈你的看法。

要求包括以下内容：

1） 赞同和不赞同的理由；

2） 你个人观点。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的。

【答案】

With the development of communication technology, cell-phones are becoming more and more popular. They have almost become part of our life.

Last week we held a discussion about whether cell-phones should be allowed at school. Opinions are divided. Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others in time of emergency. Besides, they can download music and surf the Internet for information. However, others argue that cell-phones are not a must in school but a distraction if used improperly. Worse still, some even use them to cheat in exams.

Personally, cell-phones are useful in our daily life. But it doesn’t mean we can use them freely in school. Why not allow the students to use them at designed time and places!

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文。本文属于开放性作文，没有给出任何要点，只有一个大纲，对学生的要求很高。而且还是一篇议论文，对学生的思维要求也很高。讨论的话题：学生是否应该把手机带入学校。所以使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 随着通信技术的发展，手机愈来愈普及了。同学们几乎人人都有手机。2.赞成带手机进入校园的观点：在紧急情况下可以很方便地与他人联系；还可以上网下载音乐和查找信息。3.反对的观点：手机会影响学习；有人会用手机作弊；4.个人观点：虽然手机很有用，但是也不能在学校里随时使用，可以规定在某一个时间段里使用。建议文章分成三段，第一段说明讨论的背景及话题；第二段阐述正反两方观点；第三段说明个人观点。

【名师点睛】

范文结构合理，全文分为三段，显得层次分明。列举的观点证据充足，很有说服力。主动句和被动句交叉使用富有变化。文章中还使用了宾语从句：Last week we held a discussion about whether cell-phones should be allowed at school.串联词的使用是本文最大的亮点，如besides，worse still和personally等等。选用的词汇也很合适，并没有像有的作为堆砌词汇，如：emergency，distraction等。

考点：考查开放性作文

11.【黑龙江省大庆第一中学2016届高三下学期开学考试】

高考临近，学习时间变紧，任务加重，很多同学内心压力大，学习效率低下。请为即将举行的班会写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对怎样保持良好的精神状态，高效而健康地进行复习备考的看法。要点如下：

1. 坚持锻炼；

2. 合理计划；

3. 注重饮食。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Classmates,

Good afternoon! Today is March 2nd, The college entrance exams are really around the corner now._____________

【答案】

Dear classmates,

Good afternoon!

Today is March 2nd. The college entrance exams are really around the corner now. As time becomes limited and school work begins to pile up, many students start to feel much stressed and find it hard to concentrate and study efficiently. What should we do to avoid this?

First of all, it is highly advisable that we have some physical exercise in that it is the best way to reduce stress and help us relax. Second, having a proper study plan is of great importance too，since it can improve efficiency. Last but not least, we should pay special attention to our diet as a balanced and nutritious diet can keep a busy mind smart and energetic.

Only if we can do these three things mentioned above will we make our time of study and preparation work enjoyable, efficient and fruitful.

Thank you.

【名师点睛】

本篇范文中很好地运用了各种连接成分，如first of all, second，last but not least等；这些连接词让文章第二部分称为一个有机的整体，显得很紧凑。同时文章里还使用了较多的高级句式，如only引导的倒装句Only if we can do these three things mentioned above will we make our time of study and preparation work enjoyable, efficient and fruitful. it引导的形式主语句it is highly advisable that we have some physical exercise；动名词做主语的句子：having a proper study plan is of great importance；总得说来，文章用词很地道，完成了文字提示中要的所有要点，并有适当发挥。是一篇不错的范文。

考点：考查半开放性作文