高考英语作文无话可写怎么破
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添加过渡,条理清晰
在写作当中,恰当使用一些衔接手段,包括使用过渡词和过渡句,可以使文章严谨、流畅、富有节奏。
例4 假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护;
2.展览时间;
3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold anInternationalHigh Schoolstudent Photography Show. As far as I know, the theme of the show is environmental protection. Actually, I know you are gifted in taking good pictures and have always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I clearly remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. In addition, it will start from June 15th and last three weeks and what makes us excited is that any student who is interested can participate in it. In a word, I firmly believe that this is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, please send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评:本篇范文很好地完成了要求,要点扩充合情合理。全文句式多样化,并没有一直使用陈述句,而是穿插使用祈使句等多种句式,符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句,如定语从句any student who is interested can participate in it,时间状语从句... the last time you visited our school,条件状语从句If you want to join ...等,体现出不错的驾驭英语的能力。
此外, 本文使用了as far as I know,in addition,in a word,等过渡短语,巧妙地将三个要点“主题、展览时间、投稿邮箱”串联起来,使阅卷老师对作者表述的意思一目了然,同时也增强了文章的条理。
我们写作当中经常会用到的过渡语有:first of all, to begin/start with, in the first place, first and foremost, second(ly), furthermore, moreover, what’s more, in addition, besides, but, however, on the contrary, nonetheless, in contrast/comparison, nevertheless, hence, therefore, in conclusion, to conclude, in a word, last but not least等。
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