[写作指导]
（1）拟定标题：根据议论的主题及写作内容确定标题：Study hard and enjoy yourselves。
（3）扼要概括：找出议论文的基本要素，然后用自己的话表达出来。
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论点—观点 |
work is helpful to health |
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论证—理由 |
a. work keeps people busy, away from loneliness b. work serves as a bridge between man and reality c. work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement |
（3）确立观点，实施论证：首先要定好自己的观点，不一定是自己本来持有的观点，主要是看文章怎么好写就怎样立论。然后，根据所给“写作内容”进行构思，此处要求举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的，那么，写之前可以想一想平时的学习过程中，什么时候会发笑，会高兴，再把它们搬到同学的身上，用第三人称即可。如一起分享攻克难题后的喜悦；新学会的谚语刚好应景而生；开同学一个无伤大雅的玩笑；学习之余，抽半个小时来一场三人小组篮球赛进行自我调节等等。
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论点—观点 |
the harder you work, the happier you will be |
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论证—理由 |
a. hard work can keep a person busy; b. hard work can make one feel fruitful and proud of himself; c. the above factors can lead to a healthy body. |
最后，用一两句话简述你的看法。
（三） Study hard and enjoy yourselves
The author highlights the effect of work on people’s health, because it can rid one of loneliness, and make one feel fruitful and proud of himself, which always contributes to a good body.
In common with the author, I agree that the harder you work, the happier you will be, as hard work can keep a person busy, and gives one a sense of achievement, hence he will be self-confident and feel happy.
Around me, some of my classmates work very hard, hoping to fulfill their dream. However, they don’t seem unhappy. Oppositely, they try to find fun even under the pressure of the NMET. For example, they may share the joy with others when working out a problem. Sometimes they may play a trick on his partner using the newly-learned idioms, thus refresh themselves quickly.
As for me, I think only when we truly experience what fun it is, can we spare no effort to study hard and meanwhile enjoy ourselves.